浙江省高校招生考试2021年1月
【题目】
应用文写作(满分15分)
假定你是李华,下周有新西兰学生访问你校,你将作为学生代表致欢迎辞。请为此写一篇 发言稿,内容包括:
1. 表示欢迎;
2. 介绍活动安排;
3. 表达祝愿。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【答案】
distinguished guests:
on behalf of our school, i would like to convey my sincere welcome for your visiting.
at first, it is of significance to fully understand the school. as scheduled, all of you will visit the museum, which contains the splendid history of our school. furthermore, our classes are worthy of being attended, because you can appreciate the differences between chinese and western teaching methods. after that, it is at canteen that you can have a special lunch with our
students.
as mentioned above, i extremely expect your coming. may you have an unforgettable experience.
【解析】
【分析】本文是一篇应用文,要求考生写一篇发言稿,向即将到校的新西兰学生致欢迎辞。
【详解】第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构:总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求:
1.表示欢迎;
2.介绍活动安排;
3.表达祝愿。
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
on behalf of; would like to; convey; sincere welcome; be of significance; splendid; be worthy of; appreciate; teaching methods; canteen;
extremely expect; unforgettable
第三步:连词成句
1. on behalf of our school, i would like to convey my sincere welcome for your visiting.
2. at first, it is of significance to fully understand the school.
3. as scheduled, all of you will visit the museum, which contains the splendid history of our school.
4. furthermore, our classes are worthy of being attended, because you can appreciate the differences between chinese and
western teaching methods.
5. after that, it is at canteen that you can have a special lunch with our students.
6. as mentioned above i extremely expect your coming.
7. may you have an unforgettable experience.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1.表文章结构顺序:at first
2.表并列补充关系:furthermore
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1] as scheduled, all of you will visit the museum, which contains the splendid
history of our school. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] after that, it is at canteen that you can have a special lunch with our students. (运用了强调句型)
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