??2017高考英语北京卷书面表达应用文写作思路指导? fiona

第一部分（20170627): 语篇结构+素材提取?

第二部分（20170628): 1.表达建议的句式 2.有效的连接成分使用

第三部分（20170629：范文对比

基本版：这是一封朋友之间的建议信

? ??语篇结构：语篇结构三段式：?

第一段：语言表达体现有效的交际

第二段：建议路线 + 阐明理由（“长江之行” 或者 “泰山之行” ）

?第三段：表达美好的祝愿

? ??语言运用：

????????1. 句式: 运用表达建议的句式

?? ? ? ?2. 有效的语句间的连接成分?

? ??难点：传播我们国家自己的文化，阐明所建议的具体原因和理由（3个）。?

??reference 参考资料：

?? ? ? ?? “长江之行”? ：

the yangtze is the longest river in china and the third-longest in the world.?
the yangtze drains one-fifth of the land area of the people’s republic of china and its river basin is home to one-third of the country’s population.?
the yangtze plays a large role in the history, culture and economic of china.?

there are many well-known major cities along the river, such as 重庆（chongqing), 万州(wanzhou),武汉(wuhan), 南京（nanjing）and 上海（shanghai )

take chongqing as an example, 举例：重庆?

? ? 重庆： 1. chongqing is a major city in southwest china. administratively, it is one of the china’s four direct-controlled municipalities.?

? ? ? 2. chongqing is the twin cities with leicester of england, leicester is a city in the east midland region of england and it is the county town of leicestershire.

? ? ? 3. 长江三峡 ,in english , the three gorges(三峡）, is one of the most famous natural wonders in the world.

? ? ? 4. there are different kinds of delicious and tasty local foods in? chongqing ,among which 火锅（hot pot is english ) is? special. chongqing hot pot, also known as duck hot pot（鸭火锅） or mala hot pot（麻辣火锅） , is chinese traditional diet, extensive way of dining originated in late ming and early qing dynasty of chong qing jialing river (嘉陵江）and chaotiainmen（朝天门） ferry boatmen and trackers.?

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泰山之行”? ：

mount tai is a mountain of historical and cultural significance located in north of the city of taian, in shandong province, china.?

mount tai is known as the eastern mountain of the five great mountains of china. it is associated with sunrise, birth, and renewal（延续）, and is often regarded as the foremost （最重要的）of the five . mount tain has been a place of worship(敬神） for at least 3,000 years and served as one of the most important ceremonial centers (庆典中心，典礼中心） of china during large portions ( 一部分）of this period.

mount tain is of key importance in chinese religion, being the eastern one of the five sacred（神圣的） mountains of china. according to historical records, mount tain became a sacred place visited by emperors to offer sacrifices （献祭）in the zhou dynasty before 1,000 bc. a total of 72 emperors were recorded as

visiting it, who came to acquire inspiration, to compose poems, write essays, paint and take pictures. hence, a great many cultural relics were left on the mountain.?

jinan ,the capital of shan dong province, is also known as the city of springs, where there stands a famous park names “baotu spring park”(趵突泉公园).the park is located in the center of jinan, which was built in 1956. after several expansion, the area is now 10.5 hectares. it is a cultural park mainly with spring water.the spring is numerous, especially in the world-renowned bao tu spring ,which is well-known ,far and near, both inside and abroad.

tea water made by the water from bao tu spring will tastes delicious and tasty.
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