??2021 年 1 月 12 日场的雅思写作考试现已结束，本期的雅思小作文论题是国企私企的男女作业时刻比照饼图，原题是：The charts below show the hours male and female workers work a week in government institutions and private companies.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

TASK 1

标题：男女在公共机构 ( government institution ) 和私家机构 ( private institution ) 的每周作业时长

类型：饼图静态图

考点 / 写作要害：

分段：主体一段：government ( 国企 ) 男女作业时刻 ;

主体二段：private company ( 私企 ) 男女作业时刻 ;

主体三段：男女作业时刻总比照 .

留心单词的改写 , 如 government employees=official workers=officials

重视各图中的极值，要留心运用最高档，以及句型的改换。如：

a. For male working hour in the government, the highest one ( accounts for ) 30%, which is working over 46 hours per week.

b. 3% of male officials work over 46 hours every week, and it constitutes the highest percentage of weekly working hours.

重视标题中类似的值，如国企里女人作业 13-30hrs 和 31-45hrs 的时长相同 ;

在主题三段男女别离作比照时，可以重视间隔 / 倍数 / 分数 / 类似。例如在国企，男性作业每周作业时长 1~2 小时的有 23%，大约是私企的四倍 ( 5% ) ; 在国企，女人每周作业时长 1~2 小时的有

36%，正好是私企的两倍。

范文：

The four charts provide information about five different weekly working hours in two social sectors: government and private corporation, based on gender.

这四个图表供给了两个社会部分的五个不一样的每周作业时刻的信息 : 根据性另外政府和私营公司。

In government, 30% of male officials work over 46 hours every week, and it constitutes the highest percentage of male weekly working hours. Only 9% of male employees work between 13-30 hours. Also, it is noticeable that both 23% of them work for 1-2 hours and 6-12 hours. As for females, the highest percentage accounts for 35%, which is working between 6-12 hours weekly. However, only 4% of female officials weekly working time is above 46 hours. The other three kinds of working hours are similar ( 1-2hours, 13-30 hours, 31-4 hours ) , account for 18%, 23% and 20% respectively.

在政府部分，30% 的男性官员每周作业时刻跨越 46 小时，

这是男性每周作业时刻的最高比例。只需 9% 的男性职工的作业时刻在 13-30 小时之间。此外，值得留心的是，23% 的人每天作业 1-2 小时和 6-12 小时。女人比例最高，占 35%，每周作业 6-12 小时。可是，只需 4% 的女官员每周作业时刻跨越 46 小时。其他三种作业时刻类似 ( 1-2 小时、13-30 小时、31-4 小时 ) ，别离占 18%、23% 和 20%。

In private sector, the highest male working hours is over 46 hours, takes up of 34%. It is worth pointing out that only 5% of male workers work for 1-2 hours. For those working between 6-45 hours, the proportions all take up around 20%. As for females, the highest working hour is 6-12 ( 35% ) , and the lowest one is above 46 ( 4% ) . Similarly, the other proportions are around 20%.

在私营部分，男性的最高作业时刻跨越 46 小时，占 34%。值得指出的是，只需 5% 的男性职工作业 1-2 小时。关于那些作业 6-45 小时的人来说，这一比例都在 20% 支配。女人作业时刻最高为 6-12 小时 ( 35% ) ，最低为 46 小时以上 ( 4% ) 。相同的，其他的比例大约是 20%

Overall, the average working hours for male employees in both sectors are over 46 hours, followed an average number of by 6-12hours.

全体而言，这两个作业男性职工的均匀作业时刻都在 46 小时以上，其次是 6-12 小时。

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