读后续写

出题特征

选材特征

1.读后续写的选材集合社会关怀、友谊和亲情，传递鼓舞、关怀、了解、交流、勇气等信息。内容靠近学生日子，可致使使共识，可以顺畅打开写作。

2.以情感类论题温习为主，注重学生自个的自我道德的培育和涵养前进，构建活泼向上的心思暗示。

读后续写万能前进主旨句！

【办法一：首位照顾法写】

2021年高考真题，叙说的是与健忘母亲一块去旅行的故事。

I had an interesting ?childhood. It was filled with surprise and amusements, all because of my mother–loving, sweet, yet absent-minded and forgetful.?

我有一个风趣的年少，充溢了惊喜和文娱，都是因为我的母亲——心爱，却心猿意马，健忘。

结束时分回到文章的最初再次重申母亲的性格，深化主题。

文章结束：首尾照顾

Despite mom’s being absent-minded and forgetful, she was still a kind and nice mom.?

尽管母亲老是心猿意马，健忘，但她仍然是一个和蔼可亲的母亲。

【办法二：名言式结束法】

名言结束能添加文采，凝炼中心，深化主旨，引出结论并抒发凸显主旨，烘托空气

留心：不可以生搬硬套名言警句，必定要具体文本具体分析。

Just as the saying goes，“Where there is a will， there is a way.”Now I couldnt agree more with those words.?

正如俗?担坝兄菊撸戮钩伞！比缃裎彝耆胶驼饩浠啊?/p>

【办法三：情感前进法】

Seeing?sth?, I felt as if it had been?doing?and saying,”……..”

看到某物，感触某物如同在做某动作，而且说“（杰出主题的话）”。

看个比方。主人公“我”是个颓废少年，无意中经过自个的特长“扔标枪”，找到了自傲，并成功逆袭。咱们怎么经过万能句型来前进呢？

助人型主旨前进句

Seeing the javelin, I felt as if it had been encouraging me and saying, “You’ve found your talent and I’ve found you”看到标枪，我觉得它如同在鼓舞我，并说，“你找到了你的天资，我找到了你”。这句话中，javelin是“标枪”，talent是“天资”

公式：动作+感动+感悟??助人型主旨前进句

sb looked at sth / held sth, tears rolling down without control.?It is love that makes the world go around,which sb felt deep in one’s heart.?

或人看到了某物或许拿着某物，眼泪毫无控制地流了下来。?正是爱让世界滚动，在或人的心里深深地感遭到了这一点。

这个“动作”可所以：看到了某景象，或许拿着相同东西。“感动”极好了解，别人协助了自个，发生的心境就是“感动”，最多见的就是“眼泪往下贱”。“感悟”这一句，一般是“爱”“善行”“付出”等要害词的勉励句。

生长型主旨前进句

“改动”和“生长”是咱们读后续写一个重要主题。在第二段的结束处，咱们怎样写“改动生长”型的主旨前进句呢？咱们可以根据“改动”的要从来学习不一样的表达。比方战胜困难，战胜自卑等。下面有七类不一样的改动方法。

第一类

学习常识促“改动”

常识就是力气！在改动的进程中，学习不一样的常识，然后才干面临各种困难和应战。比方屏幕前的你，不就是在学习读后续写的技巧吗？请看下面的例句，也是我送给正在学习的你。

It’s never too late to learn. Each individual has the right to accept more challenges and make moreattempts.学习永久为时不晚。每自个都大约而且有权力去承受更多的应战，做更多的测验。

【分析】individual这儿标明“自个，个别”。make more attempts 做更多测验。

第二类

发扬天资促“改动”

知道本身天资，而且发扬天资，这是改动咱们的现状的一个重要条件。请看下面的例句。

Actually, every individual possesses talent. Be brave when you find it and also make efforts. You can create miracles in the end.

实际上，每自个都有天资，发现它的时分要英勇，也要付出尽力，究竟你会创造奇迹。

【分析】possess 具有。create miracles标明创造奇迹。

第三类

追逐愿望促“改动”

永久不要无视了愿望的力气！“做人假定没有抱负,跟咸鱼有啥差异呢”。请看下面两个例句。

It’s never too late to go for your dream. As long as you grasp every opportunity and take full advantage of it, you will stand a chance to realize your dreams.追梦永久不晚。只需你捉住机缘，充分使用机缘，你就有机缘完成愿望。

【分析】take full advantage of?充分使用，??realize your dreams标明“完成愿望”

第四类

战胜困难促“改动”

只需战胜各种磨难，才干改动现状。请看下面的例句。

The journey to success is not smooth. It is full of challenges and difficulties. We should be brave to face them. As long as we don’t give up hope and make every effort to overcome all the difficulties, we will surely achieve our goal (success) finally.

通往成功的路不会平坦，充溢应战和艰苦。咱们要英勇面临。只需不扔掉期望并用尽全力战胜一切困难，咱们究竟会完成咱们的方针（成功）。

【分析】smooth 标明“平坦的”overcome all the difficulties 标明“战胜困难”；make every effort 标明“做出尽力”；as long as，标明“只需”，引导条件状语从句。

第五类

打败惊骇促“改动”

咱们在改动的进程中，常常需要战胜自个心里的惊骇。请看下面的例句：

Determination and optimism are what it takes to conquer your fear and accomplish your goal.打败惊骇和完成方针，需要决计和旷达。

【分析】Determination 标明“决计”；optimism标明“旷达”。conquer your fear标明“战胜你的惊骇”；accomplish your goal标明“结束方针”

【2023届江苏省南京市第一大学高三一模试题】?In class, I tried my best to seize every opportunity to improve

myself. Gradually, I began to have normal conversations with my classmates and got along well with them.?Everything in life was becoming more and more beautiful.

第六类

打败自卑促“改动”

咱们在改动之前，可以会有一些自卑的心思阻止着咱们生长，比方自个的表面的缺陷，性格内向等，如何战胜自卑，完成人生逆袭？请看下面的例句。

I smiled as?I?eventually realized the real source of confidence.Now, I am proud of what I look like and much happier, because I have realized it is your personality that decides who you truly are.

我笑了，因为我究竟知道到了自傲的真实来历。如今，我为我的姿势感到骄傲，而且更高兴，因为我现已知道到，抉择你真实是谁的是你的特性。

【分析】

eventually标明“最终，总算”；personality 标明“特性”。

第七类

打败低沉促“改动”

活泼的心态像太阳，照到哪里，哪里亮。“活泼”思维，究竟让咱们生长改动，这种主题，是读后续写中比照常见的。请看下面的例句。

Attitude is more important than facts for us. We cannot

change our past; we cannot change the fact. However, the only thing we can do is hold a positive attitude.

情绪对咱们来说比实际更重要。?咱们不能改动咱们的曩昔；咱们不能改动实际。?可是，咱们仅有能做的就是坚持活泼的情绪。

【分析】

Attitude标明“情绪”；positive attitude.就是“活泼的情绪”。

【办法四：用修辞办法】

以下是可以用于读后续写结束的一些美词美句，它们经过运用多种修辞办法让文章更有画面感和美感，既能点题又能大大加强文章的可读性。

1. Todays experience was like an everlasting flower， blooming in the river of my memories. 今日的阅历将会像是一朵永不凋谢的花朵，永久开放在我的回想里。（比方）（bloom开花）

2. With laughter lingering in the room， their sincere friendship blossomed in the summer like a flower that never fades. 伴跟着笑声回旋在房间里，他们真挚的友谊之花怒放在这个夏日，永不凋败。（比方）（linger回旋，徜徉; blossom开花）

3. Alexs beam of smile seemed to wipe off Theos frustration and he was really expecting to be the next champion. Alex的浅笑冲散了Theo心中的阴霾，他又初步对下一次的成功充溢等待。（拟人，比方）（frustration沮丧）

4. His words floated in the wind like a birds happy song. 他的言语回旋在风中，就像鸟儿的歌声相同愉快悦耳。（比方）

5 Follow your dream and the universe will open doors where there are only walls. 跟从你的愿望吧，世界会在正本只需墙的当地为你翻开大门。（拟人）

6. Love matters more than anything， which can conquer /overcome /get the better of any difficulty. 爱胜过悉数，它能打败人世的任何困难。（拟人）

7. The cloud removed instantly， sunshine landed on the happy teardrops in my eyes. 片刻间，乌云散去，阳光洒在了我充溢高兴的泪水上。（拟人）

此外，用“only +状语”最初的倒装，以及not only … but also…联接语句时的倒装，也是一种不错的结束。如：

Only when we open up the door of our heart can we be bathed in the brilliant sunshine and enjoy the warmth of love. 只需当咱们翻开心门，咱们才干沐浴在阳光中享受爱的温暖。（比方;倒装）

总之，高考续写的方向一般是活泼向上的，结束时一般宏扬一种正面的情感，如，“乐善好施、勤勉、友谊、亲情和自我生长”等。如2021年新高考全国Ⅰ卷读后续写叙说的是孩子们精心为母亲预备母亲节早餐，阅历一番曲折之后，究竟以阖家欢喜结束。显着，其主题为“亲情”。我們可以套用上述这个语句“With laughter lingering around the room， the love among family blossomed in the summer like a flower that never fades.”

多背诵,多堆集,树立语料库,选用句式结束,争夺抱负的分数

写作材料

各主题前进句

1、真善美-?乐善好施: ??Roses given, fragrance in hand.?

2、真善美-?活泼向上: ?When life gives you lemons, make lemonade.?

3、真善美-?自个生长:??It’s never too late to learn.?

4、亲情主题: Family and friends are hidden treasures.?

1、真善美-?乐善好施

Roses given, fragrance in hand. (赠人玫瑰，手留余香)

You reap what you sow. (种瓜得瓜；善有善报)

Sow the wind and reap the whirlwind.

Small kindness can bring rich reward. (小小的好心可以带来丰富的酬谢)

Small act can bring/contribute to/give rise to a big difference.

A small act/gesture of kindness will perhaps melt/cure one’s loneliness.

“The smallest act of kindness is worth more than the grandest intention.” (王尔德)

Never underestimate the power/value of our actions (to lift people up).

No act of kindness, no matter how small, is ever wasted.

The miracle is this: the more we share the more we have.

2、真善美-?活泼向上

When life gives you lemons, make lemonade.

To change the worst situation into best, one should take actions.

“Never lose. I either win or learn” – Nelson Mandela

Adversity/Setbacks in life is either a blessing in disguise or a fruitful lesson.

Your current situation is not your final destination.

Be patient, trust the timing and enjoy the journey.

It is better to light a candle than to curse the darkness.

Life without dreams is like a bird with a broken wing.

3、真善美-?自个生长

Where there is a will, there is a way. (有志者事竟成)

It’s never too late to learn. Every individual is supposed to accept more challenges and make more attempts.

Actually, each individual possesses talent. Be brave, rise to setbacks/obstacles, and make efforts. You will end up creating miracles. (直面困难/尽力/终将制造奇迹)

Seize the day, and chase your dreams. As long as you grasp every opprtunity and take full advantage of it, you will stand a chance to realize your dreams.

The journey to success is not smooth. It is full of challenges and difficulties.

If you get disheartened or discouraged by these hurdles, you can not attain success.

4、亲情主题

Family and friends are hidden treasures.

Family, a wonderful shelter and a 24-hour harbor, is always there for us.

Family love is the greatest gift in life.

Family is to us what harbor is to ships. (家庭之于咱们就像港口之于船舶)

“Family is a life jacket in the stormy sea of life.” – J.K. Rowling

Families are the compass that guides us.

Family: where life begins and love never ends.